With Black Witches 6 - Original Old
[CELLULOID-ACME (チバトシロウ)] Black Witches 6 [DL版]
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#376391 - almost as if we were enjoying a quiet drink together and I was giving a good friend a bit of advice! Right! Imagine that you’re telling yourself a story; try to imagine the dialogue and make it realistic. I made a slight edit to the story, put an explanatory paragraph in at the start and re-submitted it as ‘A good hard spanking for Sue!’ Nobody could have any doubts what that was about, could they? As I write this, the story in its original format has been read 5012 times and has had ‘no comments’ but the new version has had 7152 reads and has attracted 6 comments! Point made, I think! So, what do you need to write a story? You must have imagination. I’ll also credit any reader with the suggestion at the head of the story (see ‘Mother’s Girl 2’).
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